Fans and artists,

 

Just a word of explanation to give the context of the excerpt here from the opera based on Leonard CohenÕs songs/music—the operaÕs title IÕm hesitant to name but it is subtitled ÒA Musical Experience.Ó

ItÕs a opera because all the characters sing their parts, unlike a musical-theatre production where the storyline is usually spoken in dialogue and the songs accent and support the action.  In an opera, the songs and music tell the whole story.

 

The opera takes place in two acts:

ACT ONE    Metamorphosis of A Poet and Lover

ACT TWO   Education of The Universal Man

 

            The story is the journey of a man, an artist, through the dramas and conflicts that we all live out: youthful aspirations, falling in love, losing love, ambition, winning our achievements, paying the price of them, and struggling to not lose our way.   Each scene builds on the last and connects the next, completing the arc from youth to old age.  Being part of a whole, the songs have an added resonance in context.
            At this point in the story—where the excerpt is taken from—the leading character is living the life he sought to achieve, a particularly public life in that of an artist, and it is not all it was cracked up to be.

 

The opera libretto (a fancy name for the written book/manuscript) was created to be read by the players, not the audience/public, so the form and notations may be unfamiliar:

The characters/singers parts are indented and where the ellipsis ( É ) occurs at the end of
a lyric line, the singers continue the song (until the next indention, or the end of the song).  The lyrics are not written out entirely (though they are sung entirely in performance)—they are a guide for placement with the stage and character directions.  [Any stage production is a collaboration among all players, and hopefully fresh at each performance, so the synchronicity among singers and dancers might deviate slightly from the script, spontaneously in performance.]

 

Stage note:

ÒStage rightÓ and Òstage leftÓ are from the playersÕ perspective.  Opposite to the audienceÕs view of the stage.

 ÒIn the windowÓ—the stage-right wall of the set has a window, framed or unframed, expansive or narrow, through which we glimpse something outside.

ÒStage leftÓ—downstage of the entrance/exit upstage-left is an anteroom, marginal like a corridor but open to view, where stage action plays counterpoint or complementary.

 

(I attached the excerpt in Word to preserve the formatting.)

 

Hope you enjoy!


                                                The Characters

 

 

ÒOAÓ

Old Artist

ÒMAÓ

Middle-Age Artist

ÒYAÓ

Young Artist

ÒBOYÓ

Artist as a boy

The CHORUS

Greek chorus, gospel chorus, angels, Burlesque queens, maintenance workers, Pop Back-up singers, circus troupe
(lion tamer, bearded lady, clowns, etc.), and various incarnations

includes Chorus Soloists

SINGERS

Multi-racial men and women in varying ages portraying various characters (as noted in libretto)

DANCERS

Multi-racial men and women in varying ages, including a boy and a girl, portraying various characters (Mother Dancer, Nun Dancer, Homeless Dancer, Cowgirl Dancer, Biker Dancer, Trapeze Dancer, Lover Dancers, Gang Dancers, Ballroom Dancers, Jester, Cop, etc.)

NON-DANCING CHARACTERS

Bartender, Old Men in Suits, Blue-Faced Drunks, The Marginals, etc.

MUSICIAN SOLOISTS

Guitarist, Calliope player, Mandolin player, Pianist, Saxophonist, Violinist, Accordion player, etc.

The ORCHESTRA

(in the pit)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


[Excerpt]

 

 

PIANO plonks out its tune as BACK-UP SINGERS push up their breasts, wet their lips, and squeeze into their spotlight upstage for maximum effect.

 

Spotlight downstage on OA glares, full and isolating.  He takes up his microphone on the stand.

 

OA

 

Yeah my friends are gone and my hair is grey

I ache in the places where I used to play

 

OA brings his hand up above his eyes against the blank glare, trying to see through to the audience in the theatre.

 

And IÕm crazy for love but IÕm not coming on

IÕm just paying my rent every day

In the Tower of Song

 

BACK-UP SINGERS

 

Do-dah-dum-dum, Do-dah-dum-m-m-m É

 

PIANO plonks, plonks É

 

Spotlights fade and the music ends.  House-lights go up.  But OA remains standing as STAGEHANDS take away his microphone and equipment and exit with BACK-UP SINGERS upstage left.

 

On his way out, a STAGEHAND hands OA his raincoat.

 

Upstage left: the red-flashing Exit light fades to a shadowy pink as house-lights are switched off.

 

In the window: searchlight beams go dark—the partyÕs over—and a moon rises with a frosty aureole.

 

OA looks up at the waning moon as he puts on his coat.

 

A faint blue cast of the moon reveals the CHORUS silhouetted in shadow on the upstage dais.

 

OA wanders toward the moon, then back downstage which is lit only by footlights.  In this empty theatre, without an audience, he is gapingly alone.

 

OA and CHORUS

[ÒA Thousand Kisses DeepÓ]

 

The ponies run, the girls are young

The odds are there to beat

You win a while, and then itÕs done

Your little winning streak

 

And summoned now to deal

With your invincible defeat

You live your life as if itÕs real

A Thousand Kisses Deep

 

In the window: the moon grows distant and a neon ÒMotelÓ sign flashes.

 

OA pulls up his coat collar and walks stage right as HUSTLER DANCER enters, approaches stealthily.  OA pulls some cash out of his pocket and hands it to him.

 

IÕm turning tricks, IÕm getting fixed

IÕm back on Boogie Street

 

OA takes a lit cigarette from HUSTLER, inhales deeply—hands it back.  The red flame glows and trails as HUSTLER moves off into darkness.

 

You lose your grip, and then you slip

Into the Masterpiece

 

A puff of blue cigarette smoke spirals above OA.  He reaches up and tries to grasp it—but it evaporates.

 

And maybe I had miles to drive

And promises to keep

 

He turns back into stage shadow and follows the little burning spark.

 

You ditch it all to stay alive

A Thousand Kisses Deep

 

Stage left:  blue light rises on PIANIST seated at a piano.  He plays a solo as OA listens.

 

A smoky alley-light fades up center stage on three CRAP-SHOOTERS bent, hovering, rolling dice.  OA joins them, leaning in close to the comfort of bodies.

 

And sometimes when the night is slow

The wretched and the meek

We gather up our hearts and go

A Thousand Kisses Deep

 

Stage left:  blue light glimmers as PIANIST solo continues the haunting lament.

 

Stage light fades on CRAP-SHOOTERS.  OA sinks into his coat collar and walks stage right as the ÒMotelÓ signÕs blinking reflects across the stage.

 

A SEDUCTIVE DANCER (ÒLady of the EveningÓ) enters out of the dark and lures OA from behind in a sensuous tango move.  He responds reflexively—desire flaring—and turns to embrace her.

 

OA

 

Confined to sex, we pressed against

The limits of the sea

 

They dance a slow, heated tango.

 

I saw there were no oceans left

For scavengers like me

 

SEDUCTIVE DANCER imposes an aggressive tango challenge—OA hesitates.

 

I made it to the forward deck

I blessed our rambling fleet

 

One of the CRAP-SHOOTERS slips in cleverly and makes his tango move on her.  The couple dance away into the shadows, leaving OA stranded.

 

And then consented to be wrecked

A Thousand Kisses Deep

 

The couple kiss fiercely before exiting through the pink light upstage left as OA glances back sharply at them.  He laughs at himself, nearly stricken.

 

In the window: night grows darker, the flashing ÒMotelÓ sign less frequent, and the moon so far away.

 

OA buttons up his coat and moves on.

 

OA and CHORUS

 

IÕm turning tricks, IÕm getting fixed

IÕm back on Boogie Street

 

He walks one way, then turns and walks another as if turning corners of city streets.

 

I guess they wonÕt exchange the gifts

That you were meant to keep

And quiet is the thought of you

The file on you complete

 

OA stops, listens: piano notes falling like footsteps, an echo is what is not there.

 

Except what we forgot to do

A Thousand Kisses Deep

 

Stage left:  PIANIST plays solo interlude.

 

OA walks in the direction of dimming ÒMotelÓ sign.  CHORUS rise to go.

 

And sometimes when the night is slow

The wretched and the meek

We gather up our hearts and go

A Thousand Kisses Deep

 

Stage left:  PIANIST gets up from piano and exits upstage (though piano notes continue).

 

In the window: it starts raining—ÒMotelÓ sign colors meld into wet shine.

 

OA

 

The ponies run, the girls are young

The odds are there to beat

 

Stage left:  the PIANO plays itÕs music in the blue light.

 

You win a while, and then itÕs done

Your little winning streak

And summoned now to deal with your É

 

OA exits, singing, downstage right as CHORUS file off upstage left.

 

In the window:  the rain becomes a downpour, obscuring the moon.  ÒMotelÓ colors dissolve.  The stage falls into grey shadow.

 

Stage left:  the soft blue light fades down on the piano—the last chords echo through darkness.

 

The sound of RAIN.

 

A SOFT PATTER.   Then SILENCE.

 

Upstage left:  very gradually, a brighter light fades up.  OA enters through it, his coat dripping wet.  He shivers like a sorry stray.


In the window:  high up a slick reflection of streetlight like that off a wet sidewalk.  Below it just the intimation of a basement wall, underground.

 

Stage left:  brash light emerges above the Last Chance Bar counter.  A ÒBUDÓ beer sign blinks temperamentally on the sideboard as a WEARY BARTENDER pours shots into stubby glasses.

 

OA takes off his coat and throws it on a bar stool—snatches up a shot and downs it.

 

Upstage center:  jukebox lights flick on, sending colorful swirls around the room.  

 

DESPERATE GIRL DANCERS—in Cowgirl, Biker-Chick, and Se–orita get-ups—dance center stage trying to lure SHY MEN DANCERS who nervously hover together stage right in loud Hawaiian and Cowboy shirts.

 

BIKER DANCERS enter stage left, zipping up their flies, and line up at the bar with their shots.  A HANDSOME BIKER lands a tough-guy slap on OAÕs shoulder, which causes a coughing fit.

 

A COUNTRY TRIO with FIDDLER enter downstage right and set up.  ALL DANCERS promptly down the last of their drinks and get ready-and-willing—stupidly smiling.

 

TRIO plays with the FIDDLER taking the lead.

 

OA

[ÒClosing TimeÓ]

 

Ah weÕre drinking and weÕre dancing

and the band is really happening

and the Johnny Walker wisdom running high

 

A SE„ORITA makes her move on OA at the bar, who is proceeding to get wasted.

 

And my very sweet companion

sheÕs the Angel of Compassion

sheÕs rubbing half the world against her thigh É

 

SHY MEN find their nerve and rush on the DESPERATE GIRLS.

 

the fiddler fiddles something so sublime

 

FIDDLER fiddles sublimely.  ALL dance: stiff nerdy waltzes, flailing jitterbugs, square-dancing, and shimmying salsa.

 

OA and COWGIRL CHORUS

 

and the women tear their blouses off

and the men they dance on the polka-dots

 

Two SHY MEN dance the pony, hop from spot to spot like bouncing pogo-sticks.

 

and itÕs partner found, itÕs partner lost

and itÕs hell to pay when the fiddler stops

itÕs CLOSING TIME É

 

DANCERS mix it up, leave one partner for another, change dance styles. 

 

A Biker-Chick rips her blouse off to reveal a cowgirl bustier beneath. Yee-hah!

 

Yes the women tear their blouses off

and the men they dance on the polka-dots É

 

BIKER at the bar go wild, rush over to cut in on SHY DANCERS and trip over themselves, and partners, drunkenly.

 

and itÕs hell to pay when the fiddler stops

itÕs CLOSING TIME É

 

FIDDLER fiddles a blue streak.

 

OA

 

Ah weÕre lonely, weÕre romantic

and the ciderÕs laced with acid

and the Holy SpiritÕs crying, ÒWhereÕs the beef?ÓÉ

 

Biker-Chick in the bustier takes OA by his hand and leads him out to dance—heÕs drunk and sheÕs horny so itÕs a sloppy grab-and-fumble slapstick.

 

OA and COWGIRL CHORUS

 

So we struggle and we stagger

down the snakes and up the ladder

to the tower where the blessed hours chime

 

SHY DANCER comes alive suddenly and slides his SE„ORITA partner through his legs and then high up into the air, her ample bright skirt covering his happy head.

 

and I swear it happened just like this

a sigh, a cry, a hungry kiss É

 

DANCERS on the floor sigh, cry out, kiss each other—some missing the mark, others swooning, a few immobilized in it.

 

I swear it happened just like this

a sigh, a cry, a hungry kiss

the Gates of Love they budged an inch É

 

The TRIO and FIDDLER play wildly.

 

itÕs  CLOSING TIME É

 

OA follows his Biker-Chick partner across the floor like a leashed puppy.

 

OA

 

I loved you for your beauty

but that doesnÕt make a fool of me

you were in it for your beauty too

 

Biker-Chick yanks off her leather chaps and reveals a marvelous ass.  OA drops to his knees in awe.

 

and I loved you for your body

thereÕs a voice that sounds like God to me

declaring

 

COWGIRL CHORUS

 

declaring

 

OA and COWGIRL CHORUS

 

declaring 
that your bodyÕs really you

 

Biker-Chick finds another dance partner—they quickstep around OA on the floor.

 

OA

 

And I loved you when our love was blessed

And I love you now thereÕs nothing left

but sorrow and sense of overtime É

 

Other COWGIRL and SE„ORITA DANCERS rip their blouses off while SHY DANCERS chase them longingly.

 

And I just donÕt care what happens next

looks like freedom but it feels like death

itÕs something in between, I guess

 

OA and COWGIRL CHORUS

 

itÕs CLOSING TIME É

 

Stage left:  DANCERS at the bar whoop it up, splashing each other with drinks. 

 

Yeah I missed you since the place got wrecked

By the winds of change and the weeds of sex É

 

DANCERS on the floor wind down to the weary pace of marathon dancers. 

 

Stage left:  a COWBOY and BIKER slump dead drunk on the bar counter.

 

itÕs CLOSING TIME É

 

HANDSOME BIKER helps OA up off the floor and escorts him clumsily to a bar stool.  WEARY BARTENDER pours them another drink absently, though neither go for it.

 

OA

 

Yeah weÕre drinking and weÕre dancing

but thereÕs nothing really happening

and the place is dead as Heaven on a Saturday night É

 

Stage left:  An ANCIENT COWGIRL comes and nuzzles OA in his stupor.

 

And my very close companion

gets me fumbling, gets me laughing

sheÕs a hundred but sheÕs wearing something tight

 

OA and COWGIRL CHORUS

 

And I lift my glass to the Awful Truth

which you canÕt reveal to the Ears of Youth É

 

BARTENDER signals Òlast callÓ and DANCERS scurry drunkenly to get another drink and a last partner.

 

And the whole damn place goes crazy twice

and itÕs once for the devil and once for the Christ

but the Boss donÕt like these dizzy heights É

 

Stage left:  the ÒBUDÓ sign sputters explosively, then dies out.  BARTENDER brings up full stage lights.

 

busted in the blinding lights of CLOSING TIME É

 

Everyone blinks and scatters.

 

Stage left:  HANDSOME gives the ANCIENT COWGIRL the ÒadiosÓ and strokes OAÕs drunken head tenderly.

 

DANCERS on the floor swallow their last drinks and hang onto each other for all itÕs worth—rousing themselves for a final wild dance.

 

And the whole damn place goes crazy twice

and itÕs once for the devil and once for the Christ É

 

HANDSOME gets OA on his feet for a last dance.  The place is sloppily rocking and the BARTENDER is shoving drunks off his bar.

 

Oh the women tear their blouses off

and the men they dance on the polka-dots É

 

Even the ANCIENT COWGIRL tears her blouse off (an ancient granny-corset beneath) and a SHY DANCER lays his sappy head on her sagging chest.

 

And itÕs partner found, itÕs partner lost

and itÕs hell to pay when the fiddler stops

itÕs CLOSING TIME É

 

HANDSOME wipes OAÕs forehead and strokes his head in motherly tenderness as they dance.  OA wraps his arms around him and hugs him gratefully.

 

I swear it happened just like this

a sigh, a cry, a hungry kiss

itÕs CLOSING TIME É

 

BARTENDER goes berserk and tries to sweep everyone out.

 

DANCERS and OA try to get their clothing back on and start exiting upstage left—straggling together for support, crying and laughing, blushing and bowing. 

 

The Gates of Love they budged an inch

I canÕt say much has happened since

But CLOSING TIME É

 

ALL straggle off drunken and weary, smiling sadly, smiling badly, smiling É

 

I loved you when our love was blessed

I love you now thereÕs nothing left É

 

TRIO and FIDDLER exit downstage right.  Voices fade in the distance:

 

CLOSING TIME, CLOSING TIME É

 

WEARY BARTENDER lowers a big switch.  Stage goes pitch black.

 

LAUGHTER, then a SLAP.  A man CRYING.  A woman COOING.

 

In the window:  expands to the rise of dawnÕs stark promise—a harsh unearthly light, lonely and hollow like every hangoverÕs morning of raw reality.  Church spires peak through the starkness: Sunday morning—silent bells and birds fluttering in church towers in an empty sky.

 

A light fades up center stage, though the stage margins remain in shadow.

 

Stage left:  muted light on an alleyway shelters OA and HANDSOME BIKER, passed out with heads fallen against each other, slumped beside a rubbish bin.

 

HANDSOME wakes, raises his hand to his bleary eyes and squints at the light.  He gently lifts OAÕs head off his shoulder—OA wakes and holds his hurting head.

 

HANDSOME helps OA up and they hobble together out into center stage.

 

They straighten themselves, embarrassed by their drunken intimacy (what they can remember of it!) and slap each other in manly salute. 

 

Light glimmers down, as from a church window, on CHORUS seated on the dais with heads bowed over their gospel robes. 

 

HANDSOME wanders off, losing himself in the shadows.

 

The slow percussion beat of ÒAnthemÓ intro sets OA moving—but stilted and undirected.